I’ve just heard from the authors of this book, that all the annoying bits I’ve ranted about have been removed since May, so what can I say but ENJOY!
This book has been in and out of the Amazon Bestsellers over the past couple of months so I thought I must have a read. Love story, rural setting. I loved it, strong characters, good-looking bloke, all the things that I felt weren’t tied up, were by the end, good twist and conclusion was all I could wish. It’s well written and produced too, although in a really amateur manner they had to split the word falling on their title page. I was interested to see how a collaboration between two writers would work, and it does.
BUT I really, really disliked the commercialism. Twice in the text, comes a page, saying if you liked this, you’ll love our other books, blah,blah, blah. First time had me thinking it I’d inadvertently downloaded a sample. This is so intrusive, it’s unbelievable.
This almost had me put the book down and not review it, but I have to have my rant! If your book is good, you don’t need to be peddling it in this way. Its annoying. I don’t want to know about your website, or the other books, except maybe at the end when I may want to read a sample of your other books, but this is AWFUL! It’ll actually stop me reading anymore by these two.